Among tall trees
on an unseasonably warm day.
Just warm enough
just quiet enough
absolutely private enough
to go naked.
Which is a good thing
because naked it is.
Legs still wet
from dancing through a stream,
skin just moist
from climbing
halfway up the hill.
Tall trees.
Soft leaves underfoot.
Birds in the canopy overhead.
Leaf-filtered sunlight dapple our bodies.
And nothing else,
no one else,
but you and I.
A solemn silence,
broken by giggles.
First you.
Then me.
“Let’s play hide and seek,
I’ll count first…”
And you turn.
Lean over.
Cross your arms against warm, rough bark,
rest your forehead upon them,
shift your weight from foot to foot,
and pause…
Solemn silence,
broken by wind in the treetops far above,
broken by dancing circles of light on your back,
broken by sunlight caught in your hair,
broken by a tiny shadow shifting across your ass,
broken by a tiny whine of a single mosquito,
broken by a reflexive slap,
a murmured non-apology,
a gentle rub,
a makeup kiss,
Then the story becomes too jumbled to recount,
and too memorable to forget.
Solemn silence,
broken by our catching breath..




Submitted by 766 (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-22 03:21.
Solemn silence? I would say more satisfied silence, at least satisfied for now.
Love your sense of fun. More adults should remember how to play!
Love the pic. Low light? Just enough to see you with, my dear, chuckles the lady wolf!
[Oh thanks, Rhia! --fl]
Submitted by 766 (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-22 05:19.
oh, i simply adore outdoor sex. a walk in the woods always puts me in the mood. you painted a wonderful scene. and that pic is positively wonderful. i love the subtlety of it.
[Thanks, Lime! I was really happy it came out that way. I *really* didn't want a classic "headless horseman" photo it just didn't look like that at all. --fl]
Submitted by 766 (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-22 10:59.
Sounds wonderful, and I love the ghost-penis photo.
[Thanks, AAG. It is sort of a ghost-penis effect isn't it? Sort of like you can stare but you don't have to. --fl]
Submitted by 766 (not verified) on Mon, 2006-05-22 19:06.
beautifully written....
gives such a sense... of play and sensuallity
[Thank you, SilentOne. It's another one of those stories that wound up somewhere I hadn't expected. Glad you enjoyed it. --fl]
Submitted by 766 (not verified) on Tue, 2006-05-23 08:03.
Figleaf:
Of all your poems that I have read, this is the finest. Do you know what it brings to mind? The Ronde des Princesses from Stravinsky's Firebird.
Maybe this is a trick of my monitor, but I did not realize what was the subject of your photo until I read the comments here. At first glance, it appears to be a sideview of your torso, (head, shoulder, arm) superimposed on the background. It was only when I went back for a second look, did I understand what the other readers were talking about. Every home should have such a ghost.
[Wow. Thank you, Kochanie! --fl]